Eyes of B (2)

The thing that really grabbed me when I saw this, other than the obvious expressive eyes, was the really good use of your space and focus. I like how the arm acts both as a stop, keeping our eyes from drifting off the page, and also forms that wonderful negative space which frames the focal point. The use of eyeliner which matches the mask and head covering. Just a couple of things that I noticed, the first is that while I think the lighting is good I think that if the shadows were just a little deeper it would create more mystery. Also the strap on the left arm is distracting. I know that there is little that can be done about that, but it is worth mentioning. Overall it is a good shot much stronger than the straight on shot.